oiticica-description

Rewrite English prose into concrete, distinguishing aspects with rubric evaluation.

10|Updated May 15, 2026

Search Tags:#description #prose revision #English grammar #objective rubric #style critique #clarity through specifics

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npx skills add https://github.com/pasunboneleve/oiticica-style --skill oiticica-description

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Please help me install this Agent Skill.
Skill: oiticica-description
Source: https://github.com/pasunboneleve/oiticica-style/tree/main/src/oiticica-description
Command: npx skills add https://github.com/pasunboneleve/oiticica-style --skill oiticica-description

SYSTEM DOCUMENTATION & REQUIREMENTS

💡 This Skill includes references (resource) components.

What problem does it solve?

Oiticica-style description turns vague “mood” writing into a sequence of concrete aspects the reader can actually see and locate.

Core Features & Use Cases

Aspect-based description: Selects aspects that distinguish the subject from a generic class member.
Objective review rubric: Judges revisions with concrete checks (visibility/audibility, distinctiveness, ordered location).
Model vs repair workflows: Preserves source-model examples, or performs Weak/Fault/Better repair when the passage breaks the relation.

Quick Start

Use oiticica-description to revise the paragraph so every sentence adds a specific, distinguishing aspect in a reader-locatable order.

Frequently Asked Questions about oiticica-description

High-intent search queries and answers about installing and using this skill.

FAQPage Schema

How do I rewrite vague English descriptions with concrete aspects?▼

Concrete description revision transforms vague mood writing into a sequence of distinguishing aspects the reader can see and locate. It applies an aspect-selection rule set to replace generic labels with specific, ordered details in people, places, objects, and scenes.

What is an objective rubric for prose revision and style critique?▼

An objective rubric for prose revision evaluates descriptions using concrete pass/fail checks for visibility, distinctiveness, and ordered location. This style critique mechanism replaces subjective preference with measurable criteria applied to every sentence.

How do I fix generic mood statements in descriptive writing?▼

Fix generic mood statements using a repair-mode workflow that identifies the weak fault and generates a better version by selecting distinguishing aspects. This process enforces modern English grammar and objective rubric evaluation to ensure clarity through specifics.

Can I preserve strong model passages while repairing weak descriptive text?▼

Yes, you can preserve strong model passages while repairing weak text using separate workflows. Preservation-mode maintains source-model examples, while repair-mode identifies faults in weak passages and generates better, aspect-driven alternatives.

Does this prose revision approach work for descriptions of people and places?▼

Yes, this prose revision approach works for reviewing and rewriting descriptions of people, places, objects, still-life, and scenes. It applies an aspect-selection rule set to distinguish each subject from a generic class member with concrete, locatable details.