oiticica-narration

What problem does it solve?

It fixes weak English narration where events drift out of causal/temporal order or lose the tight link between actions and their motives and consequences.

Core Features & Use Cases

• Orders episodes clearly: keeps events in causal or temporal sequence unless reversal is clearly deliberate.
• Names each episode’s parts: actor, action, obstacle, and result for every meaningful turn.
• Avoids decorative pauses: removes description that doesn’t change the episode or prepare the next one.
• Uses the right linkage: chooses summary for routine links and scene for decisive turns.

Quick Start

Use oiticica-narration to review and revise this passage so each episode’s event-order and action-to-motive/consequence link stays tight.